Claire DeCloux

Lol, Claire - are you from Tunis, or Greater Tunis? (We are, we are....)

Just read "Mendigo". It was a sad and touching story which really expressed the picture of the old man. I've only read this one short story of yours, but if you have others similarly written I would enjoy reading them. Keep writing.

Glad to be your friend! I look forward to reading more of your writing.

Thanks Claire, for giving me the privilege of being your friend!

About time you listened to those voices. They will drive you crazy if you don't.

Hope you have a nice day.

No prob. Nice to meet ya.

-Chas

Thank you for, the comments, I APPRECIATE you taking your time to read my post.

May the creator of heaven and earth BLESS YOU and Your Family in a Mighty Way, In the name of The King of King The Lord of Lord Jesus!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Have A Great & Powerful Day W/J

Hello Clare.

You commented: "I'm new here. I enjoyed "Sex with Girls.""

Me, too.

I've not done much essay writing, but lately it's called to me.

If you truly -- I mean truly -- want in-depth critique, not just a cheerleader -- and you're committed to your writing, not happy to just splashing first drafts on a web page looking for praise, I'd be glad to offer my insights.

I've made far more distractors on Gather than friends with my critiques.

Post to my "Short story and more!" I'll have a look. You may wish to check out my writing first, to see what I do. I write literary fiction/social commentary. I just posted "Sex in Literature," which contains my short story "Cherry Coke," as well as an essay.

Warning: it contains 'sex with girls.' If you don't have access, you need change your 'settings' to allow access to rated material.

See you around the cyber town.

Claire, it's an honor bein' your new Gather friend!

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